27 February 2007

What's wrong with this headline?

From the AP story about the bomb at the base in Afghanistan visited by the undead US Vice President "I'm a Big" Dick Cheney:

Cheney OK After Afghan Blast; 23 Killed

Might it not been appropriate to alter the syntax a wee bit so that the headline would read

23 Killed in Afghan Blast; Cheney OK

Just a thought.

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